Catching a boat

X was feeling very weak... I mean, who wouldn't after using an attack like that!

Even as his eyelids were starting to droop, he kept on hacking at the monster making sure it was out cold or not even alive.

Everything seemed to be okay but as X started to walk away... He got nailed, hard!

The moster got back up. X hadn't made things better, he made them worse! The monster was hungry now... and pissed!

-Time for that move! Ragnarok said running towards the beast. *MYSTIC ARTE-SEISMIC RAMPAGE!*

Ragnarok spun three times in the air and with each spin came an energy wave. He then followed with a double sword slash and a huge beam.

-You want it? You got it. X! On to you!

X then jumped and violently smashed the creature to the ground. The eel-like creature then retaliated by holding X with his teeth.

-Argh! get me out of this thing! X said kicking at the creature.

-You got it!

Ragnarok shot a large blue beam that cut the creature's neck clear off, leaving X enough time to escape. Weirdly enough, the creature remolded itself within seconds.

-How do we beat this thing!? Ragnarok exclaimed.

The red beast looks at the eel and says"thou have been avoiding your time and your time is supposed to have endeth a long long age ago..."

He lifts his right arm and mutters something in a dialect that is unbelivebly ancient and the beast starts to cripple but then it is infused with red essence and breaks apart body by body but the proccess is too slow and the beast lashes at the red beast and a battle ensues...

A red circle appears near the group and Caitar crawls out with three black essence beings and says "hahah no one can defeat me that easily!!!"and looks at the beasts and says "ATTACK!!!!"

His newfound friends attack the beasts and Caitar throws his dark stars,shoots the crossgun at the beasts and lunges in with guns blazing...

Ragnarok put on a scared face. With all of the red creatures running at them, and not enough energy to use another mystic arte, they are pretty screwed.

-Luna!

-Yes?

-Do you have any mana?

-Well, quite a lot.

-USE A MYSTIC ARTE!!!!! Ragnarok yelled impatiently.

-Oh yea.... Luna said spaced out.

-HOW COULD YOU FORGET!?

Luna shrugged.

-Zaktar! Use one too!

-Right!

-The combination might break through the forces!

Caitar slahes at the eel ripping bodies from its hideous form "hahahah this is too easy!!!" then the bodies as they are slowly disolving start to form another beast but smaller and attack Caitar....

He says"SHIT!! damn you Nurse!!!" his minions still attacking the ancient red essence beast get attacked by the smaller corpse beast they rip bodies off the beast but it just keeps attacking the Ancient one takes its weapon and kills a minion and halves the small corpse beast

Caitar yells at the mana group "attack the corpse eel's brightest corpse!!!!"

Caitar points to a bodie on where the forehead would be on the eel which is significtly brighter than the rest

Caitar says "thats Nurse's corpse!!!"

He shoots at the corpse and the beast lurches and lets a blood curdling scream out and attacks Caitar more fiercely than before he dodges and runs to the Anceint one and uses his trinket that he found and says"bara niftoc!!" a white beam stabs into the Anceint one

It says" i will obey untill the beast is slain"

he stops attacking the minions and decimates the smaller eel then halves the real corpse eel.

The eel screams "I WILL KILL YOU ALL!!!AND YOUR CORPSES SHALL BE MINE EHAHAHAHAHA!!!" in a possesed female demon voice

- Ragnarok you go dragon wheal Luna, Caitar and Leony give you all of there mana!!!

R- What will you do!

- All go spirit form on your back and that will double the intake of mana!!! WE CAN WIN !!!

Zaktar go's spirit form and pripars to get on Ragna-Dragons back.



Zaktars spirit form:

When Zaktar went spirit form Valrex 'his dog' changed into a enormous ferocious gargoyle !

- KOOL !!!!

V- Now I can be more of assistance.

Valrex then attacks the ell thing and do's ferocious damage.

Caitar says"nice one Zaktar!!Ancient one use the banishing spell!"

Ancient One "Affirmitive my leige"

Ancient One says something in Ancient dialect and a huge rift appears and starts merging with the eel...the small dissipate quickly and the real one is going slowly it shrieks a terrible wail and roars a bonechilling cry Caitar runs up to the beast takes his sword and stabs it into Nurse...

Nurse"AIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE!!!NONONNONONOONONON NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!?!?! YOU SHALL DIE CAITAR I SWEAR IT!!!!AIE-"

Nurse explodes...and the beast gets merged with the rift and disappears...

Ancient One "the bell tolls for thou Caitar Amiditus...die"

Anceint One strolls over but as if he was slowing down time all around him Caitar could move ever so slowly he looked and saw everything moving slowly...but Anceint One was strolling over spinning his scythe casually...

Caitar thinks "DAMNIT"

then all of a sudden the Ancient One stops....it starts to spasm then it looks at Caitar and says "thought i was dead didnt you?" in a feminine demonic ancient possessed voice...

Caitar "No no no no no no no No NO!!! how are you alive?!?"

Possessed "eheh Caitar Caitar tsk tsk....i am the master of the undead i have been killed before...why would i know so much about death? ahhaha!! now Caitar ill kill you and your friends in this form and with my new pet...

possessed makes a gesture with her hand and speaks something in possessed dialect...a circle appears on the ground chains appear,they rise...as the thing fully rises everyone stares in horror..the eel once again but this time its fully essence...Red essence...

Caitar "NOO!!NO NO NO!!! WHY MUST YOU LIVE?!?!....again you kill my friends....i hate you so much...mother...."

"MOTHER!?" Everyone exclaimed at this revelation.

"We new about Nurse, but not that she was your mother!" Ragnarok exclaimed.

"Yea I know.....But, I did help with this journey, its not who you parents are, its who you are." Caitar said.

"I think it does matter right now, here she comes!" Luna said hurriedly.

"Caitar! Zaktar! You ready?" Ragnarok yelled.

"YEA!!!"

"Let's do it!"

Ragna-dragon flies up with Zaktar while Caitar jumps on his back. Ragnarok then threw the two right at the still living eel creature, making them plummet right into the creature's face. Unbalanced, the creature fell backwards and Ragnarok took the chance to grapple the beast, leaving it helpless on the floor. Zaktar and Caitar then used this chance to slash it's eyeballs clear out, leaving it blinded and suffering. The eel creature slowly slithered back into the waters from where it came, where it can heal without being disturbed, not to come back again.

"Now for Nurse!" They said.

With the eel gone Caitar looks at nurse/Anceint One and says "your gonna die this time forever"

Nurse "HAHAHAH dont make me laugh you cant kill me permanently i will kill you even if you are my son i never liked you anyways"

Caitar takes that last bundle of words hard and crys a little...

Caitar "RAGNAROK,ZAKTAR KILL HER NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Ragnarok,Zaktar, and Caitar charge at Nurse she laughs then she spins her scythe time slows down she strides to Zaktar slices he falls to ground she goes over to ragnarok same thing...she comes to Caitar she says " what happened to im gonna kill you,your gonna die?hahaha"
She swings the scythe sideways but then Zaktar and Ragnarok jump in and tackle her Caitar jumps slices her ,ragnarok says an incantation a mighty sword appears in front of him he dances around then slices her 40 times in the most artistic way possible,Zaktar and his pet Valrex jump in and slice at her rapidly ripping her essence apart she yells and shrieks she evaporates

Caitar "huff huff we did it... we killed her....yes im finally free im finally-"

Caitar coughs up blood Ragnarok says "Caitar? holy crap!!'

Nurse says "how do you like getting stabbed? hmmmmmm? see how it feels?well ta tah im leaving-"

Caitar spins around grabs her sword rips the handle off leaving only the blade and stabs it into him he then grabs nurse and bear hugs her she shrieks as the blade stabs into her

Caitar "heh heh looks like its the end for you COUGH well mom do you like me now huh?"

Caitar slumps down and hits the floor with his big grin helm facing up...blood oozing between the teeth of the grin...nurse wails and then is gone with an explosion of light...........

(if i godmodded im sorry but i wanted to get this over with now you guys can continue with mitheos)

"Holy sweet mother of lord of Martel," Amaterasu growled.

"This isn't good," Luna replied. She kneeled down next to Caitar. "You alright?"

"Do you THINK he'd be alright? I KNEW something bad was gonna happen," Amaterasu retorted. Luna looked at Amaterasu and glared.

"Now's not the time," she said. "We need to split up here. We need to help Caitar, and we need to get Aqua's core."

Only few thoughts go through ones mind when dies...here is Caitars

Have I loved enough? Have I hated enough? The answer lies within
One must go through hell to reach heaven
life isnt about the first fifth its about the four others
...if i commited suicide when i wanted to..i would have been dead a long long time ago...and never wouldve gotten to where i am now....
Suicide and Matyrs, the difference Matyrs get praise and suiciders get hate...
uggh i am dying hmmm this is the end, the day i stop living the day, where i sleep forever...i will miss life though and all my friends...my soul shall be at peace....

End of thought. . .in the memory of Caitar, a brave soul who died a Matyr....

Zaktar tries to get over to Caitar... But he has no mana and his spirit form is out for now.

- sssorryy Caitttarrr... Then Zaktar falls from so little mana.

( don't heal Caitar, he has a good idea )

As Caitar lies on the ground motionless with blood seeping through his helm...a figure walked over to Caitar
he kneeled beside Caitar and did some examination on Caitars body...Hami howled as his master was lying on the ground...

the figure said "does anyone have a crystal?"

everyone shrugged

the figure said "as i thought"

he put his index and middle finger on his forehead spread apart...a small red glow appeared near the finger's tips...ten seconds later the glow became wisps flailing around then they plunged into Caitar's head and Caitars body spasmed wildly and then the glow went away...the figure slumped down...

Caitar arose and said "im alive?how?i saw the gates...i saw them why am i alive?"

Ragnarok steps forward and says "that person saved you" pointing to the figure

Caitar "huh?" he looks down at the figure and says panically "hey you ok?hey get up..GET UP!!"

Caitar grasps the figure tightly and crys...

Caitar "Doc i loved you..."

Zaktar look around and thinks " is Caitar gay ".

-Oh thank you Luna for helping me, but what is that!!!

The party look at the edge of the forest and sees Netheos " BUT I KILLED YOU!!! " said Ragnarok.

Netheos - Yes you killed 1 of me, but there is an army of me that Lord Mithos Yggdrasil cloned!!!

R- DAMN IT!!! NO! NO! NO! HE... YOU... NO!!!

Suddenly Zaktar shoots an arrow at Netheos's head, Netheos moves out of the way. But it hit him in the chest and punctured a lung. Rgnarok walked over to Netheos and steeped on the arrow so as to have him spit up blood.

R- When and if you see your boss, YOU TELL HIM THAT WE WILL NOT STOP TILL HE IS DEAD, DEAD!!!

"You're too late," Said Netheos weakly "Mithos is already gathering more cores... Victory is im...pos..ible....."

The clone of Netheos turned over dead, dissipating into a ball of light. Out of the ball emerged the core of the centurion, Aqua.

"Mithos will pay for what he's done to these people...."Ragnarok said, fist clenched. "He doesn't know the meaning of pain, but he will. I swear it..."

Caitar ties Doc to his back and gets up and says "ok that damn mitheos guy is DEAD DEAD!!!! at first he was he just some damn punk but now he killed Doc...DOC!!! he is gonna pay!!!!! im gonna kill him even if it kills me! and these Neotheos i slaughter them all till they are nothing but bloody mist!!!"

Zaktar goes over to Caitar and says" are you insane this is mitheos he is evil you cant take him on alone and Doc didnt die because of mitheos he died because of you"

Caitar looks at Zaktar and says" Mitheos is a punk i can take care of him myself and how could you say that Mitheos killed Doc! i bet you are on mitheos side!! i bet he told you to kill Doc and you killed him you all did you all kiled him there was no way he could have been killed easily you all jumped him and tehn as he was dying he healed me so i could kill all of you!!!"

Zaktar says" what? no Caitar-"

Caitar says in a crazy "liar youve been lying all along!!! so you could kill me cuz im a threat to the master plan of total domination!!" Caitar takes his sword out and slashes at Zaktar and cuts him really badly and then wildly slashes at everything his helmet falls a bit off and exposes his face his eyes were maddened and insane like they were in frenzy of killing

Zaktar tuns to smoke cuz it was en illusion.

Z- Caitar you have to stop we are your friend and if you don't stop, I will have to go without you! MY FRIEND!!!

Leony jumps in front of Zaktar and says "you're to weak get Ragnarok to heal you I'll fight first but there is no guarantee that I'll be coming back Caitar's pretty good. NOW GO!!!"

Caitar charges at Leony, Leony blocks she shoots an arrow of spirit particles (from Bleach) Caitar dodges it.

-Caitar I can try to heal Doc! she said urgently so she could stop the battle.

C-No

Caitar lunges at Leony and stabs Leony in the arm. Leo rushes to help his master but is blocked by Hami, Leo whines Leony looks backand says "it's going to be all right" not very sure if it was going to be all right.

Leony charges at Caitar and says "I'll miss you" and stabs Caitar in the arm but she thought it wasn't very strong because Caitar was laughing.

then suddenly a strange thing happened Leony was overwhelmed with power and was suck up mana from the air healing her wound. She lunged at Caitar and stab him right in the shoulder and then smack him in the head with immense power and then flash stepped behind Caitar but Caitar beat her to it and punched her right in the stomach she coughed up a little bit of blood and then flash stepped back. She had super speed and super strength but it would be still be hard to beat Caitar without killing him and then an image of Leonys parents the image said "we have given you are only daughter a special power that has be past to each of are family members and now to you use it wisely"

and then the image disappeared and Leony about to be clobbered by Caitar, Leony said just before Caitar clobbered her "mom dad".

Caitar striked with his punching dagger and cut Leony's stomach open and then said "one Mitheos Doc killer down a few to go!!" and he turned to Zaktar who was just getting healed by Ragnarok and lunged at him Zaktar stepped away but Ragnarok didn’t move quick enough and Caitar slashed murderously and relentlessly at Ragnarok.

Raganarok says” Caitar cool it!!we didn’t kill Doc!! We didn’t-”

Caitar interrupts” SHUT UP!!!DIE YOU TRAITOR!!” and Caitar nearly takes Ragnaroks head off with his sword but Ragnarok dodges it

Ragnarok says “I’m gonna end this galai tala-“

Caitar pulls out his crossgun and says “shut up damnit!!” and fires at Ragnarok who goes down hard and coughs some blood.Caitar walks over and shoots some more lead into Ragnarok.

Zaktar yells at Caitar”OH MY GOD YOU SHOT RAGNAROK!!!WHAT THE HELL SNAP OUT OF IT!!!”

Zaktar fires an arrow into Caitar but he just looks at Zaktar more intensified with anger, hate, MURDERABLE RAGE.

Zaktar” Shit!! Come on man snap out of it!! You already got leony and Ragnarok-“

Caitar interrupts” why stop now? I got them i should finish all the traitors!”Caitar advances to Zaktar

Zaktar fires more arrows at the advancing caitar while backing away from Caitar.but Caitar just laughs and his grin and the grin from the helmet are suddenly the scariest things in the world because they are exactly the same and both have murderous intentions

Zaktar says” SCREW THIS!! DALAK TOR MAKIN!!” a huge beam of energy hits Caitar and murderous smile is wiped off his murderous face...

Caitar says in a creepy scared child voice”why did you do that?why did you fire at me? The others didn’t fight back?wahts wrong with you!?!” his voice then changes to a panicked crazy voice “Get away from me die!! Go away just DIE!!” then his voice changes to a panicked voice”DIE!!Get away from me goto Lucifer and never bother me again!!” caitar charges at Zaktar and stabs him in the stomach

Zaktar says” why? Why Caitar we are friends!”

Caitar says”TRAITORS ARENT FREINDS!!!” and stabs Zaktar multiple times...

Caitar walks away muttering to himself about Doc traitors and killing Mitheos and Neotheos...

Luna strolls in several minutes later after the chaos for she was getting some healing meds she looks around and sees Leony’s stomach ripped open blood in a large puddle around her Ragnarok just some 16 meters away with his body ripped apart with bullet holes,then she sees Zaktar his body gushing blood from his wounds. He made a moaning sound and luna rushed over to him and said “WHAT HAPPENED HERE? DID MITHEOS COME?DID A WHOLE ARMY OF NEOTHEOS COME?!?!DID-“

Zaktar interrupts “no no it was *ugh *wheeze Cai *cough *hack tar”

Luna says “what?

Zaktar says “he went insane and *cough *cough thought we killed doc and *hack blood* and just came at us. Leony tried to stop him but he overpowered her and stabbed her stomach *COUGH *COUGH and then he went after me i escaped but Ragnarok wasn’t fast enough so *Grunt Caitar slashed at him then Ragnarok tried to do a spell but *cough Caitar pulled out his gun and shot him and then shot him again while he was on the ground *cough *grunt then he came after me i shot an arrow at him but he got crazier...then he advanced on me when i tried to reason with him so i fired more arrows but he kept coming so i used a really powerful spell *COUGH *COUGH *COUGH i thought he went back to sanity but he got more insane he was terrified or something and charged at me and stabbed me in the stomach i tried to reason with him but that made him stab me more...*coughing fit”

Luna says “I have to heal everyone right away!!”

All of sudden an ominous and oh so familiar voice speaks “Hello Luna going to heal the traitors?”

Luna spins around and sees you know who Caitar standing only a few feet away with cross gun resting on his back like a swordsman he then draws it and says “can’t heal if your dead can you?”

He draws his gun aims and fire- he then stands still his body spasms and he falls down standing behind him Neotheos smiling with a sword with blood on it... he says “what was that Caitar? Going to kill me till im bloody mist? Hahah! Don’t make me laugh-

Caitar says “you just laughed”

Neotheos snaps “shut up you damn prick!!” and then Neotheos gets shot in the face by a magic missile (the classics live on!!) and dies...although it’s a damn clone!
Luna heals Zaktar Ragnarok and Leony but Zaktar is the only one conscious or is actually fully aware of everything i.e. Ragnarok is conscious but he thinks he’s flying a tomato
Luna says worriedly “what are we going to do with Caitar? We don’t if he’s sane enough to not kill us...”

(Zaktar i am asking you to post after this post and no one else especially the guy whos flying a tomato and if i godmodded...well it makes a pretty damn good story doesn’t it? and i will correct myself next time kk? because i don’t really know if this is goddmodding or not cuz’ i didn’t kill you and the reason the fighters lost is because their friend suddenly attacks them but they don’t want to kill him and they try to reason with him so ya...and i did heal everyone in the end and killed a neotheos kk?)

- WE LEAVE HIM !!! He is to powerful when he gets like this and there is no way that I am fighting an OVERPOWERED maniac that can't control him self !!! I think we should leave him, cuz if he can't understand who his friends are when he is like this then his not my friend. So I think we should leave him.

After the party is OK and they are healed they listen to what Zaktar has to say. The party looks at Zaktar then at Caitar who is locked up in magic stopping chains.

( Caitar if you don't stop being overpowered then I think that we should have a vote, if Caitar stays with the party or if he go's his own path and comes in contact with us some times. )

(Caitar, Zaktar has a point, this is getting very repetitive and annoying. Even though I haven't been here until the middle of one point, I've still heard from you from Ragnarok and Zaktar. You are breaking one of the rules - overpowering. Heck, getting repetitive too. You make this monster appear out of nowhere, we fight it, then you turn demon and kill everyone, THAT IS GETTING ANNOYING.)

Amaterasu growled. "I say we freaking just kill him right here, he's already annoying enough being alive,"

"Where did you come from?" Luna asked.

"Front door," Amaterasu replied.

"There's a front door somewhere in this topic?" Luna asked, looking around.

"Yes. Now shut up."

"Your mom," Zaktar growled, who was currently annoyed.

"What that really necessary?" Luna asked.

"Is your face necessary?" Zaktar retorted.

"I'm pretty sure it is, she needs it to breathe and everything," Amaterasu replied.

"You don't need a face to breathe." Zaktar replied.

"Your mother needs a face to breathe." Amaterasu growled.

"Your mother is a face!" Zaktar retorted.

"SHUT UP ALL OF YOU!" Ragnarok growled. Everyone shut up.

Luna sighed. "If he's going to kill us as he is now, I don't know. But we need to find a way to make him control his demon side. Either that, or we tie him up to a tree with magic resisting chains once we get out of this place."

"I still go that we ditch him here," Amaterasu growled. "We need to freaking find the next core before Mithos finds it first. There's almost no time to rest right now, so COME ON."

(ok guys if u let me out of chains i promise not to over power k? u can ban me from forum if i do please let me out of chains...i apologise for overpowering....i promise not to ruin your stories anymore its just that u guys just dont seem to haev much good stuff no drama...no deep things about characters so that is why i come in write tons of stuff that derives from the story and ussually causes me to overpower but pascall in your book would u have something where the adventurers just wnet underwater see some mist get teleprted away then go to mitheos defeat him and take core or all of that till teleport and then they fight a monster and it has deep emotional ties to a character and then after the fight where tons of people gte owned and stuff the emotional ties character dies epically and then gets healed but then he gets insane and kills everybody and its all emotional and then like the guys get healed and tie him up to tree and like heal him and screw around with his mind that if he tries to that he'll get like shocked or something or...u tie him up leave him and he never comes back and u go to a lame fight with the evil guy and like hes like shapow and then u guys no u didnt and then hes like aggh im dead bleh and fall and then yay we saved the world yay we are like tottally boring and predictable...that is why i put all this emotional stuff in the story cuz u guys put none...kk?so if u want good story that can get published keep me please? )

(Uhhhhh this RP is supposed to be a published story? No can do, you can't publish fanfictions unless you decided to talk for a VERY LONG TIME with Namco and give them all the rights. And you think you can publish a story with a writing style like that? No, not at all, even on the internet, YOU ARE NOT A BUNCH OF 3RD GRADERS, SO YOU TYPE PROPERLY. Heck, I'm such a writer addict that I've invented my own stories, and I know how to use something called SPELL FREAKING CHECK, OKAY? Though I've noticed that this forum doesn't ALLOW spell check, therefore epicly fails.

Second keep in mind that even though you put character development, (which is good) this is a ROLEPLAY, not a STORY, and a lot of other people may find it annoying that the story focuses on character development with always the same person, and as you may have not noticed, we'd like to focus on other people too, not just stuck with one.

We're not saying character development is BAD, we're just saying that being overpowered is annoying. It's called god modding. Apparently, in this board, (which BUGS ME...A LOT, BECAUSE THIS SHIT HAPPENS) we can god mod to an extent, but Caitar, you're like "I turn into demon form, fight you, kill you, fight you, defeat you, fight you, defeat you, then I knock you out." You're not giving anyone the chance to do something. What if the person doesn't WANT to do that certain attack, or is quick enough to dodge you? This is the fun about an RP with no god modding, you don't know what the person does, you control your own mind. This is why I prefer other RP sites, because this one allows god modding. Here's the difference between with god mod and no god mod in a fight:

WITH God modding: *cuts the enemy's leg off*

WITHOUT God modding: *swings sword at the enemy's leg*

See difference? This comes to an extent, you can't dodge all the time, that would be overpowering. Heck, god modding is over powering, and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, I'M SORRY, BUT WE'RE ALL MARY/LARY SUES! And in case you don't know what those are, Lary(for guys) and Mary(for girls) Sues are people who defy logic and always finds some way to never get hurt and stay out of freaking trouble!

Heck, you guys probably aren't reading this because you're all like "UUUUGGGH, WHY WON'T SHE SHUT UP SHE'S TALKING TOO MUCH" and skip this. If you ARE still reading this though, you get a cookie.

Sorry if I get annoying, but 1. I'm a girl, GIRLS TALK A LOT, 2. I'm a Gemini, and Geminis are VERY logical and will give VERY TRUE FACTS TO ARGUE WITH PEOPLE, HECK THEY CAN VERY EASILY BECOME LAWYERS, and 3. As a writer, I've gotten used to write very long structures like this. And Caitar, let me tell you, right now, what you're doing isn't character development. It's madness.

......

....Madness? THIS IS LARY SUEING!

Trust me, I write stories, I KNOW the difference. We already KNOW that Caitar can destroy people if angered, we already KNOW that you're very powerful, we already KNOW a lot about you, when we barely know anything at all about the other characters. When doing things repetitively, that's called Lary Sueing. Or Mary Sueing for girls.

And don't say anything else, I mean it. Geminis like to argue. I WILL counter against you. I'm sorry, it's my instincts. >_< I naturally argue with people to prove a point.

Sorry. T_T)