Catching a boat

(when do i get a cookie?i read it so can i get a cookie?also Luna i wasn't thinking aggh and you sound pretty reasonable and well i am a logical person and i thank you for your reply that actually has sense since well some people can't spell here and it would be a smart idea of spell check and yes i do overpower yes i do this and that and it was stupid of thinking this could be published...but we can write a story but come on some characters need some development and could i have a finer example of Lary suing about repitive?how is repitive lary suing as in i don't know how it is not as an arguement because i have a friend who will argue till the cows come home about anything...so ya i have made mistakes i have done this and that but come on i havent seen anything atall that has taste 'cept lunas posts and i goddmodded thta should be taken away so i don't do it cuz' i lary sue it's just what i do if you give me something i'll try to push a bit further i just do and i am a smart ass i try to work around stuff and don't get hurt what i do ussually if i screw up i will try to do something in equal terms to fix it so like i do somethin like say....i hurt someone ill try to say massage them so it goes away...so in this case i critically wound you then heal you and i get hurt aswell but of course you think its madness i am unhappy that you guys hate me...hmmm maybe luna could show me what good writing is and what bad writing is....and ya can you see that i screwed up? its called tweaking if somethin's bad you fix it so just you know try to fix it say like use some spells to like make Caitar different or we can kill him and ill make a new character with time flux abilties....but it still wont be the same without kill happy Caitar...so ya decide my fate give me some pointers and lets forgive and forget...)

(sorry about this but I have spell check and I think Caitar should stay)

(To Leony: Seriously? I don't see a spell check icon on the reply page. <_<

To Caitar: Oh, trust me, I know when people screw up XD But you DON'T want me to teach you the difference between good and bad writing XD

Amaterasu: Oh yeah...>_< I've heard her RANT FOREVER about story writing. Heck, she taught someone how to write properly and forced them to do 10 Chinese push-ups every time she found a mistake in their writing. She's a horrible teacher. >_<
Me: .....*ties Amaterasu up to a tree* ANYWAY...You heard nothing! ^^
All of you: o_o
Me: .....<.<....>.>.... *whistles innocently*
Akuma(demon wolf character of mine): ......Our creator is insane.
Amaterasu: We know she is.
Me: No I'm not.
Akuma: Yes you are.
Me: Shut up Akuma.
Akuma: Why does everybody tell me to shut up?!
Me: Because it's one of the ten commandments. "Thou shall tell Akuma to shut up at every time of every place, or else ye shall smite thee."
Akuma: How crazy ARE you people from heaven?!
Me: Shut up Akuma.

Seriously, Ragnarok, Zaktar, when you see me at school, I may be quiet and I barely say much, but I will get TICKED if you don't write properly XD

But just a few basics Caitar, not ALL past relevance has to end up with you trying to kill someone. You had a good going there when this Doc person, whoever he is, died and saved you, but it kinda got ruined when you got angry and started attacking. It sort of 'killed the moment' if you know what I mean. But I get those kind of characters, the guys who get angry when a loved one dies instead of sad. Those are insensitive, somewhat 'cold' characters, and a lot of people like those kind of people in stories, but don't exagerate it. What maybe would have been better, is if you got angry, maybe ATTEMPTED to attack someone, but someone like Zaktar or someone makes you snap out of it because of one of those "If this person was still alive, would they like to see what you have become?" sort of lines. (yes we all know those lines are cheesy, but cheesy is sometimes good when you're serious and you put it in the context)

It's called CHARACTER CONTROL, when you see a bad guy, go ahead, use them as a punching bag, but attacking your team mates can become offending for other RP players, okay? This ain't no story that you can control, this is a group story. We all have to agree on parts and acts.

Heck if this goes on well I could put it into a story and add it to FanFiction.net...

Heh, fun. I'm still new to FanFiction.net though, I need to find out how the hell I manage the control pannel on my profile...lol.

Oh, and here's your cookie. *gives Caitar cookie*)

(yay cookie!!but the thing is i hate those stupid look what youve become things so i thought kill kill kill! so i made him slaughter the party i dunno about you but i thought that was way better than some moment of what you become and stuff but come on happy happy=pansy unless its got a twist...say nerd gets beaten up then one day the bullie gets hit by semi so then it happy ending that is good story bad story is nerd learns to overcome...that isnt intresting and come on if i go around using characters from past its all good but if i just go along with the pansy adventure story...i will just ruin it for the sake of it cuz' seriously happy endings that have no remorse or stuff suck...i hate those stupid adventurers kill bad guy and everyones alive but hate it when they kill the cool characters(nerd from jurassic park...he was awesome why you killz him why???) so ummm whats the decision of my guy is he dead or is he freed or am forgiven but have to take oath not to godmod and like such and such sooo ya can i have some pointers? oh ya if i keep going im not going to silence my characters forever...:3 also the reason why i dont post on the other stories is because no one will pay attention to them....hmmm was this a bad idea to write this post......)

(That's because we people are PEACEFUL people and don't like refering to killing our friends, because we fight FOR them and not fight them litterally.

Amaterasu: O_O
Me: What?
Amaterasu: YOU'RE GONNA MAKE THAT IDIOT APPEAR OUT OF NOWHERE
Ike: I fight for my -
Me: SHUT UP IKE. WE KNOW YOU FIGHT FOR YOUR FRIENDS. NOW SHUT UP.
Ike: .....
Me: .....
Amaterasu: .....
Ike: You'll get no sympathy from me.
Me and Amaterasu: -_- (Anybody who doesn't get this joke hasn't played Super Smash Brothers Brawl.)

But dude...keep in mind that this isn't a story, this is an RP. In stories, sure, go ahead, kill whoever you want, we don't care, but in RPs, you work together with other people, the point of an RP is that you work together get through a certain storyline, you don't twist it up insanely. (I've done that before in an RP Board, been hated, I never do that anymore) There is a clear difference between a ROLEPLAY and a STORY. I'm gonna let you have some fun and look up the differences yourself. Then you may understand why you're bugging people. Plot Twists are meant for stories, not for roleplays, unless you can make them fit without ticking people off, okay? So keep in mind that killing people is OFF the list, unless you want to kill one of your own characters, then heck, maybe we'd even do a big scene because it isn't YOU killing one of US, it's YOU killling a character you made, therefore maybe we wouldn't feel so bad, unless we asked you to kill off a certain character. Just...no murders on the board, okay? Nobody likes those kind of people anyway.)

awwwwwwwwwww oh well i will just slaughter the people i create but really do you guys like this non insanity? cuz' really this s spoon feeding...i am one of those guys who really doesnt like happy unless its hardcore or twisted in some way (I.E. Zanta claws by Eddsworld) and secondly i am seriously sorry that everyones pissed but one thing i wanted the post to end fast, i healed you ,i became unconcious, i had emotional atomosphere, and so please just stop KK? cuz really its forgivable but if i do something unforgiving like post 18+ insult people be a prick and do something unforgivable its the boot for me...that is my logic..I should write better grammer wise but this site doesnt have spellcheck or grammercheck so im doomed to bad writing...and apparantly always going caitar says zaktar says is like simon says...I think that i should have simon says....simon says dont hate me anymore...wonder if itll work..

(i'm sooooo confused....)

(I want to jump in so...i'll try)

A young girl appers she looks all beat up and hurt.

Luna- "Oh my..." Luna cusses "are you okay?"

Amaterasu- "What is it Luna?" then he see's the girl they are the only two to see her. "Luna heal her!"

Luna- "Here goes all my Mana, i'm already low..." *Luna revives the girl and her wounds dissapear*

Alysii- *Laughs hard* "Well, well your skills are amazing..."

Luna- *Shocked* "Thank you?"

Alysii- "Too Bad! I have to kill you!"

Luna and Amaterasu jump up out of suprise and fear.

Amaterasu- "What? What is that?"

Alysii's hand starts to glow a bright blue. It starts to form a sphere and it gets bigger and bigger.

Amaterasu- "We have to attack it!"

Amaterasu tries to attack but it fails his weapons get blown away.

Luna is holding on for her life.

Alysii- Relese! Mana Sphere!

Alysii's words were her comand the sphere relesed. BUT in the wrong direction, her own Mana ball hits her. Alysii goes flying and she hits the ground. She is bleeding from the mouth.

Luna is suprised and managed the words "Lets make her our prisoner."

Amaterasu- "Agreed, we also have to tell everyone."

Caitar tied to tree wakes up and sees everybody and says "hows it going?" drunkingly, they look at him with disgust he asks "whats with all the unhappy faces?did i do something wrong?"

Zaktar walks over and says" Caitar you nearly killed all of us!"

Caitar replies" I dont remember that..."

Zaktar says angrily" you never do!!"

Caitar then sees a familar face...Lucifer

Caitar says "hi lucy!"

Lucifer says" hello Caitar guess what?you're in big trouble so your punishment begins now" in ominous voice

Caitar says "huh? what? wait Lucy come on now dont be rash"

Caitar starts to spasm as Lucifer possesses Caitar...

Caitar looks around sees hes in a small black room crucified to a wall, blood is painted to look like a cross around him...a sinister laughter is heard Caitar looks around and sees lucifer....

Lucifer"the next 24 hours will be punishment for you"

Lucifer takes a scythe and slashes Caitar across the chest causing to bleed and his bottom half slumps down to the ground...

Lucifer says"23 hours, 59 minutes, and 59 seconds remain"

Caitar body reforms and Lucifer kills or inflicts extreme pain to Caitar
...

1 minute after Caitar spasmed he starts breathing heavily and starts screaming "I WONT DO IT AGAIN I SWEAR!!!PLEASE DONT HURT ME!!!" Caitar breaks into tears...he then looks at the party and says in a quivering scared child voice" i wont do it again i wont hurt you again just free me please dont let him come back please dont let him come back!!"

Alysii interupted. "Hey don't hurt him." Caitar looked suprised as he didn't know Alysii was tied to the other side of the tree.

Lucifer- "Why not?"

Luna- "What?"

Caitar- "Yea, what she said!"

Alysii- "You idiots (Not really Alysii can be rude when she's angry) You Should be focusing all your attetion on the Level 10 Robbers and their Demons behind you."

Robber 1- "What? How did she see us?"

Robber 2- "Give us all your Gels and Gald or else!"

Luna- "Never!"

Robber 1- "So be it! Charge!"

Zaktar appears behind the robbers and delivers 1 swift blow with the end of his samurai sword and 1 of the robbers falls face first to the ground!

robber 2- HEY YOU CAN'T DO THAT !!!

The second robber tuns around and tries to kill Zaktar, but Zaktar was not there. Then out on knower six arrow hit the robber and he falls dead.

Z- So how was that for my first fight in 4 days !? And I got 1 of them to interrogate!!!

Alysii - NICE !!! Well don!


( Alysii are you an archer? Cuz you could join my Undying Archers!!! )

(Yea, I am in a way! But my Needles don't need a bow!)

Alysii - NICE !!! Well done! I underestemated you! But I feel bad because I have to go now!

Alysii's wings break open. They don't cut the rope because they are made of light. She screams the words

Alysii- Divine Judgment!!!

The Judgement rays don't hit anyone but cut the rope binding her and Caitar.

Caitar- I'M FREE!

Alysii- Not really!

Alysii takes two large needles and spins them in one hand she releses them and they go right into Caitar's Hands. Pinning him to them tree.

Zaktar- What the? I thought? To many moves...

Alysii- Bye now!

Alysii flies up and up untill they can't see her anymore.

Zaktar- What now?

Luna- What is that?

Zaktar- Huh?

Zaktar picked up the note it read...

I'm Alysii, not very nice to meet you. I'll meet up with you again one day. You want to find me you'll follow the map to the Circled town ont the map. If I meet you there be ready for a fight. I know where you are going and I always will. Untill you kill me that is. By the way you might want to takes out those needles from Caitar's hands or he'll bleed to death.

Zaktar- What map?

Caitar- HELP ME?!?!?!?!?!

Luna- I got it... you look for the map.

Zaktar- Found it! Lets continue with our mission though we'll go there soon enough. Then I can find out who she really is... Then kill her...

Luna- WHAT?

Zaktar- Nothing...

"What the hell?" Amaterasu growled. "Whatever, where's Ragnarok and Tenebrae?"

"Should we care?" Zaktar asked.

Meanwhile Luna was removing the needles from Caitar's hands.

"OW!" Caitar exclaimed. "Hey, watch it, that hurt!"

"Oh, stop whinning and hold still," Luna retorted. Luna removed (with difficulty) one of the needles.

"OW!" Caitar yelled again. Luna sighed.

"If you can't stand still, then it's gonna take even longer," Luna replied.

"Anyway, hey Luna, where's X?" Zaktar asked.

"How should I know?" Luna asked.

"Because he's your partner somewhat..."

Luna shrugged. "I dunno. But see if I really care much." she replied.

"Why are you not so gentle now?" Caitar asked.

Luna simply pointed at the sun that was starting to set on the horizon nearby. Luna's physical features also started to change as well. Her golden wings were slowly becoming black, and her soft, brown gaze started to harden, a red glow illuminating from them. Her staff started to become red and black, and her clothes changed color as well.

(Current form:

)

"Now hold still," Luna growled, her voice almost cold. She yanked out the other needle, ignoring Caitar's cry of pain.

"Owwww, god damn you! That hurt!" Caitar growled.

"Quit whinning," Luna retorted. "We don't need cry babies here."

"Yeah, you can heal the wound now," Amaterasu remarked.

"Can't he freaking heal himself?" Luna growled.

"Beyond my knowledge, I'm not sure," Amaterasu replied.

"I'm out of mana anyway," Luna added.

"Well then here," Amaterasu tossed Luna an Orange Gel. "Use it."

"Fine," Luna replied bitterly. She used the Orange Gel and some of her mana recovered. She pointed her staff at Caitar's bleeding hands and a purple magic circle formed around Luna.

"Heal wound done in battle, pain be gone, leaving only scars of the past. Rejuvenation," she murmured. A blue light covered Caitar's wounds on his hands and a new layer of flesh formed on top of Caitar's wound.

"Thanks," Caitar replied.

"Just don't do anything stupid later," Luna retorted bitterly.

"Well, this is gonna be pleasant," Zaktar muttered to himself.

Alysii was riding her pet Dragonis.

"Alysii- We strike when they reach there next town. Only Zaktar know what the map had circled. And that town...well not town.

Guard 1- What do you mean?

Alysii- I explained this to you Idiots! The whole Map was circled! That means we follow them and strike when they reach their next town! I'm going after the one named Zaktar! You take care of ther rest!

Guard 2- You Idiot Guard! Why do YOU get to be leader!

Guard 3- Yea why?

Guard 1- Because me-Lady's father also known as..."

Luna snaps out of her Vision

Luna- Guys! You might want to know this!

Caitar falls to ground and says "thanks Luna but who the hell was that girl? and why did she pin me to the tree? I didn't hurt her...*sigh im sorry guys for hurting all of you...can you please forgive me?"
Caitar looks around

Caitar says worriedly" wheres Hami?...you didn't kill him did you?"

Luna- Caiter... Alysii got him before she got away. That's why she pinned you to a tree so she could make sure we found her.

Caiter- WHAT?!?! I'll Kill her! That Prick!

Amaterasu- Calm down Catier!

Caiter- HAMI IS THE ONLY ONE I HAVE LEFT!

Everyone notices tears going down his face.

Luna- Caiter I promise, we WILL get Hami back!

Caiter- I know...

There is a blinging light behind the characters. Everyone turns to the light to see what is happening, they fianlly make the thing out. It is Alysii.

Alysii- Caiter...Your mutt...

Caiter- What the Heck did you do to my dog!?

Alysii- Shut up and let me talk! It's poisned and badly...I don't know if magic can Heal a wound this deep either...

Alysii shows the wound and it is worse that anything they ever saw. It was bleeding and Infected.

Alysii- I only know one way to heal it. Unless you have the Centurion of Water with you then we'll have to do that.

Luna- What is that?

Caiter- Hami...I'll do anything to save my dog...

Alysii- So be it... Hand over Amaterasu's core!

Luna- What?

Zactar- What?

Caiter- What? You're one of those Servents for Mithos!

Alysii- Of course. I'm Alysii Targathyr. Elite Assassin for Cruxis. Now I don't want to kill you! Hand over Amaterasu's core!!!!

Luna- Never!

Caiter was breathless...he had to choose between the life of his pet or Amaterasu

Alysii- NOW!!!!

(Hard choice right? You'll see she'll come through eventully!)

Amaterasu gave Alysii a WTF look. "I'M NOT IN MY FREAKING CORE YOU IDIOT, YOU CAN'T HAVE MY CORE, IT'S ALREADY GONE, WHAT ARE YOU, STUPID?"

"Shut up Amaterasu," Luna growled. "Listen you, you're gonna hand over that dog or else be prepared to die,"

"Do you want him to die?" Alysii challenged.

"We already have the Centurion of Water," Zaktar replied. "So we would know how to do it,"

"So you have Aqua's core as well," Alysii growled. "Good, I could kill two birds stone."

"Listen you," Luna hissed, gritting her teeth. "Hand over Hami and we'll deal with him fine, or you don't and I will make you," Luna's red eyes glared with hate at Alysii. "And trust me, you don't want me to make you do something,"

Caitar yells "IM GONNA KILL YOU!!!YOU LITTLE PRICK DIE!!!"

Caitar charges at her he lashes at her fast and wildly but she jumps away

Alysii says" whoa chill man its a dog...just hand over the core"

Caitar yells" DIE YOU PRICK!!!" Caitar pulls out his trusty cross gun and fires at her then the guns middle part opens and he fires one round at a time but like a shotgun...

Caitar yells"BRING IT ON IM GONNA KILL YOU PRICK!!"
everyone can plainly see hes enraged again...

"OH, COME ON," Amaterasu growled. "Not ****ing AGAIN, OKAY, GIRL, you better hand over the dog RIGHT NOW before he kills you, because when he's like this, he WILL DO ANYTHING TO KILL WHATEVER HE SEES, OKAY?"

Luna, though, was just ticked off that nobody would do what she says. "EVERYONE SHUT THE HELL UP!" she roared. She then launched at Alysii with blinding speed to try to snatch Hami, but Alysii surprisingly saw it comming and dodged.

"Just hand over Amaterasu and Aqua's core, and everything should be just fine," Alysii said calmly.

"You think we Centurions are some sort of item that you can bargain for?" Amaterasu growled. "WELL I OBJECT, we are living things, WE HAVE FREAKING RIGHTS, so don't you just think that we are items you can trade for god damit!"

Luna glared at Alysii. "You've just done the worst thing on earth now. We JUST got Caitar out of demon mode, and NOW you've done it again. So how about you do us a god damn favor and hand over the dog before you get your freaking ass kicked?"

((Seriously Alysii, we gotta get Caitar out of demon mode RIGHT NOW before Zaktar appears out of nowhere and gets really ticked. See previous pages to see WHY I don't want this happening again.))

(((Got it.)))

Alysii looked at Caiter. He look mad beyond belief. Before Alysii could say anything Caiter was trying to tackle her. She eaisly dodged it. She looked Luna in the eyes and saw her desprateness. Alysii dropped the dog from 20 feet in the air with a wide grin on her face. They all jumped for him. Caiter catched him. They were all making sure he was okay.

Alysii- Hold Aqua's core close to his wound and he'll be fine.

While they all did that Alysii took out her Needles and shot one straight at Amaterasu. Trying to turn her into a core making her not resist capture. Luna realized this but it was too late Amaterasu was in her Core.

Luna- Amaterasu!!!!!

Alysii picked up the core. She smiled so greatly.

Alysii- Thanks...

Alysii heard the scream again, and again, and again.

Alysii- GOD DAMIT!!!!!!!!!!

Alysii throws the core to Luna and starts to cry.

Alysii- Don't make it so easy next time. I want a challenge! Not like stealing candy from a baby!

Alysii flies away.

Luna- Huh? I don't know an Elite Assassin that gives what she stole back...

Zaktar - NO you are dead !!!

Zaktar jumps into the fight and tries to grab Alysii but she was to fast. Zaktar then tries to grabs her again. Zaktar then throws her to the ground then grabs the magic stopping chains and tries to tie her up.

Luna growled. "Oh well."

Luna picked up Amaterasu's core and held it high. The core opened and Amaterasu popped out of it. Ammy snarled in anger at Luna.

"I will kill you the next time I get turned into a core and get taken, okay?! DO NEVER LET ME GO BACK INTO THAT THING, OTHERWISE THAT MEANS THAT I'M GONNA GET ABDUCTED BY CRUXIS ALIENS." Amaterasu spat frantically.

"Calm down," Luna hissed. "But seriously, I don't know WHY the hell a kiddnapper would give back what she stole."

"SEE IF I CARE, JUST DON'T TURN YOUR BACK ON ME FOR A SECOND," Amaterasu growled frantically. Her pelt was bristling, so it was obvious that she was freaked out of her mind. "AND WHY THE HELL IS SHE STILL HERE?!" Amaterasu growled at Alysii who was grabbed by Zaktar.

Luna sighed. "You talk as if there are attacking trees here."

"You're right, ALL TREES ATTACK SOMETIME OR ANOTHER, AND SOME DAY, YOU'LL LEARN THAT TOO."

"Oh, shut up," Luna growled. She walked over you Caitar and Hami. "How's he doing?" she asked.

Alysii flips the chains and throws them away. Alysii jumps up and throws same needles at Zactar. He takes his sword and cuts them in half.

Alysii- Hmph pretty good.

Alysii Throws a shadow ball at Zaktar. Zaktar just moves.

Alysii- I'm Wasting my time!!!!

Zaktar- I have had it with you! Valient Fang Solar Destruction!

A gaint blast of darkness blasts at Alysii. The shadows starts to form something. It is a beast. It strikes at her and inflicting a lot of pain. She falls to the ground and says...

Alysii- What power...I...

And at that Alysii faints. and out of tiredness Zaktar faints too.

Luna- What just happened?

Caitar walks over to Alysii and takes her to the tree and crucifies her.

With a grin on his face he says"what am i going to now Alysii? your pinned to the tree and i am your captor and gaurd...your not going to get off the tree...if you try i will kill you*crazy laugh* whos the one in control now?!? ahhahhaha!!"

Luna looks at Caitar thinking "Goddamnit hes insane"

Alysii wakes up and looks at Caitar and then screams and says"what the hell am i doing to this tree!? you crucified to this tree?! What the hell?!"

Caitar laughs and says"just returning the favour and also when i said i was going to kill you i meant it"

Alysii says"Ha you cant kill me"

Caitar replies smugly" your powerless and i have a deadly array of weapons and i could call Lucifer to have an appointment with you...nah ill just kill you myself"

Caitar levels his sword then moves it around pointing at Alysii's body

Caitar says devilishly"Where or where will i put it? the heart?no...the neck?no...maybe the stomach?nah...i know! how about a dance?"

Caitar starts to move around like in a dance then does a spin and stabs Alysii pulls back does another spin but brings it in diagonally Alysii screams he then jumps back, and takes his gun out and does a cartwheel sideways and shoots at Alysii then spins once shoots spins in other direction twice shoots all the spins getting closer and closer till hes done the dance and stabs up into Alysii's stomach and goes through to the tree Alysii just drools because she felt so much pain it doesnt matter anymore to her...Caitar pulls the sword out

Caitar wipes his sword and then says"have you learned your lesson little angel? NEVER mess with a demon...stupid angels thinking they're hotshots...

Caitar says to Luna"lets go im done here..lets go kill mitheos and all his damn minions"

Caitar picks up Zaktar and they leave with Luna...

Guard 1 says"Alysii what happened?"

Alysii makes a drooling noise mixed with a whimper

Guard 1 says" Damn they must've been strong"

Guard 2 says" heal her damnit!!"

Guard 1 replies" don't yell at me!! you always yell at me!!"

Guard 2 yells" this isn't the time!!!HEAL HER NOW!!!"

Guard 1 sighs and then says" fine.." he says some magic words and a blue light appears and Alysii's wounds heal

they go on her flying mount and fly away to goto the next town and attack the little group when they reach the next town
(Alysii i warned you not to steal my lil puppy)

((-_- Okaaay....I'm not gonna make any comment on this. Caitar...if Zaktar yells at you...don't come crying to me.))